1. Why in the fvck would you sell yourself short like that? If they hire you, they know they can pay you shit because you are willing to accept it and you will not say around very long."Currently looking for a position within Human Resources in the San Diego Market. I am willing to accept an entry-level position with in the Construction Industry to gain valuable experience."
2. "To gain valuable experience" sounds cheesy and is really only acceptable for truly entry level jobs, ie. a job you have while in high school or attending college.